Thursday, 8 December 2016

Album song names

1. You & Me (feat. DoubleÜ)
2. Loyal
3. Golden
4. Fantasia
5. Fever
6. Right There
7. On & On (feat. Caroline)
8. Static
9. Poplar Trees
10. Regression
11. Settle
12. Amelie

Monday, 5 December 2016

Digipak development


To try and gain inspiration for an album name we could possibly use, I decided to scroll through my music and see if there were any songs or artists that had names that we could use as a jump start for our own.

Whilst doing this, I noticed all the different album artwork. I decided then to google this and see if I could gain any inspiration from album artwork that had similar concepts to ours.

After doing this, I could tell that most albums expressed the meaning of the album or the title. I decided to look up synonyms or other meanings for Isolation, Entrapment Or Going back. From doing this, I found the word 'regression.' We felt this was perfect for the album name as it expressed our music video song, the look we were going for as well as expressed her character.

Here is an example of an alteration of the album artwork with the name of the album:
After attempting to add the name of the artwork, we were not sure whether the set up was right and looked professional. I decided to play around with different layouts to see what looked right :
We are still unsure of what album artwork to go with, so we need to take some more photos to see what else we can work with.

Friday, 2 December 2016

Audience Feedback


Now we had finished our video. We wanted to get some audience feedback to see what the end opinions for the video was. 
The audience felt that our strengths were mainly through our dance, choice of lighting and pace. They said that they were constantly intrigued and never felt bored. 

The only weakness they said was that they might have liked to have seen more of the dance as they thought it was so good that it was a bit of a waste. 

Another positive is that the audience seemed to have understand our concept; isolation/entrapment. As well as this, they also understood that the dance was a reflection of the artist's song. 

Overall, a successful audience feedback. 

Thursday, 1 December 2016

First attempt on the Digipak

Today we discussed several ideas that we could use for our album artwork. This included ideas for the front, inside and back cover. I came up with the idea of using a 'contact sheet' inspired inside cover. I feel like this is effective as it gives the audience an idea of who the artist is as well as upholds this dark persona. 


As well as this, I played around with making the front cover. I wanted to try out different layouts and ideas to see what would work and what wouldn't. This was what I came out with as a start point.


I had to ensure I kept with the same font and idea of the name as the website. As well as this, with the image behind our artist we felt it appropriate to add the 'explicit content' sign as it is a subtle furthering of her dark image. 

Tuesday, 29 November 2016

Performance Cut VS Final Cut

Here is a comparison between our performance cut and our final cut. There are several differences that can be seen between the two. 

  • The beginning in the final cut has been made a lot slower. This is to allow the audience to be introduced to the artist and have a feel for her character. As well as this, it also allows for a more impacted build up as the song progresses. After receiving feedback, we were also told that slowing the beginning down might be more effective as it was quite fast paced. 
  • The colouring of the video has been altered. This is because we wanted to make the video more professional by slicking the shots up. We played around with contrast, brightness, saturation and more. 
  • We spent a lot more time focusing on cutting the shots on the beat instead of on the lyrics. This was better as our song was very fast paced and it worked better by cutting on the beat.
  • There was a section in the middle that cut to black on a certain beat. After receiving feedback, we decided to change this. We replaced the black shot with a moving shot so that we still had the same effect, but it still maintained the pace of the song.
  • Finally, we were able to add in the dance element and the other lip sync which we had not been able to do as a result of the power cuts. Through editing we can see that the dance and other lip sync became crucial in maintaining the theme, concept and audience interested throughout. The dance was particularly effective as it showed both the story of the song as well as added something extra to the video. 

Sunday, 27 November 2016

Editing the final cut

As we now had all of our footage. It was time to edit the final cut. It was important to make sure that all the repetitive bits be removed and replaced with the new footage to have a slick and effective final cut. To ensure this, we watched through our performance cut and made note of all the places that need to be replaced by the new footage. Once we got started, it was slightly challenging as we did not have a clipboard on the shoot day as there was another shoot happening on location that needed it. This proved to be more challenging when matching up the lip sync with the music as we had to take our time to ensure it was accurate. 

From watching the performance cut, we realised we should probably slow down the beginning as there was not much build up. This was where we decided to put the beauty light set of Genny. It worked well as it was vibrant and strong, but also gave the audience a moment to establish who the artist is. 


However, whilst editing the beginning we came across some problems. We found that we did not get enough footage of Genny and this new set on the shoot day. This was because we were finding it hard to create a punchy opening that wasn't too repetitive as we had not been very creative with the shots. As well as this, several were out of focus as there was a problem with the exposure which we did not realise on shoot day. However, after a few days we managed to edit an opening that ticked the criteria, by bringing in the dance earlier than planned. 


The next bit which we needed to change was the middle. We received feedback from our peers who all said that the beginning was great as there was a really effective build up that keeps you intrigued, but then it suddenly slows down and loses pace during the middle of the song. We found that the best way to solve this was to add more dance. However, this also proved to not change much as it was missing pace still. We then came to the conclusion that the problem was the pace of our cuts. We spent a few hours re cutting and making the edit more fast and slick. This thankfully proved to solve the problem. 



Our teachers watched the video and gave us several different pieces of feedback. One was the opening and ending shot. This needed to be changed as we want the audience to feel intrigued from the moment they watch it till the last shot. Another was our choice of cutting on the dance shots. We were told to change them so that the shot would cut before they finished their movement. Lastly, they said that we needed to make sure that all our shots of Genny were in focus as there were some that looked as though they were out of focus and not on purpose. 


As we had spent so much time on the edit this week, we found it was best to leave it till Monday and finish the edit then.

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